Beautifully written.

I like it alot! I just added you to my yahoo messenger! Hope you don't mind..

The poem shows a picture of great love... yet the picture could have been colored a litle better by a bit more complex lines... lines that make that extra depth and amplify the message of the poem...

Anyways thats just my opinion...

Overall the poem is good =D

Awwe it was such a nice poem. you realy knowthe right and real meaning of love. great great work i will give you 5/5 becasue you deserve.

Thanks

This is a poem with expression of love and that is what I like about it.
Take Care.