Razor blade games (403)

by NinjaGirl   Aug 10, 2007


There's no sense in playing games
Playful things aren't razorblades
They cut, they rip, they tear you apart
They slice, they slash, they break many hearts.

You say you'll change but you're still on your ass
Your denying the future and reliving the past
It's time to roll over and start all again
But you won't differ you're just a man.

So I'll take the wheel and keep us from dying
Don't say you're moving forward, I'm the one driving
Don't say you're floating, I know you're falling
Just think, back to me you will come crawling.

Sometimes I just lose myself in our fights
Sometimes I can't say what's wrong and what's right
Sometimes I abuse the facts of science
But it's not my fault, I'm the one driving.

There's still no sense in playing games
Because that's not what I do with razorblades
So come on out with what you have got to say
Come on, spill it, don't be ashamed
When you're the only one to blame...

I just want to hide in my bed
I need some mead to clear my head
I'm dying but you still won't see
I've crashed and fallen but this can't be.

We all have to live in your world don't we?
Nothing bad ever happens, you get rich for doing nothing
But this is reality and you have got to do something
If not for you then me, please...

'Boy' I say 'I'm dying, I really am dying'
'Don't say that' you say and start your crying
'You should have taken the wheel when I started to veer away
Now I'm on my deathbed, and guilty you will stay'

'But girl I love you and I still do'
'You were never my type, i was a fool for believing in you'.

So why did you go home that night and start playing some games?
You committed suicide with my razorblade.

éopyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Illusion

    Superb piece
    great... simply great
    and u deserve 5/5
    it was complete sensible and touching

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    I could visualize everything I was reading which is a good thing. Not everyone can do that in a poem. I thought it was really good and well written. Good job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Suicide is a common topic most especially in this site but then your work is somehow different from the poems in this poem coz this one can easily be visualize by the readers and some scenes or lines are easy to relate with..

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Beautifull poem carry alot of meaning and you write it in good way with nice flow and powerful words make it stronger my favorait part is when you say:I just want to hide in my bed
    I need some mead to clear my head
    I'm dying but you still won't see
    I've crashed and fallen but this can't be.
    may i love it the most as i feel it now
    5/5 well done
    keep write

  • Wow what a great poem! It definitely scores a 5/5 for me! I got very caught up in your poem. It was very emotional. Thanks for sharing.