by NinjaGirl Aug 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
There's no sense in playing games |
by Illusion
Superb piece |
by Bugg
I could visualize everything I was reading which is a good thing. Not everyone can do that in a poem. I thought it was really good and well written. Good job!! |
by ECILA ice
Suicide is a common topic most especially in this site but then your work is somehow different from the poems in this poem coz this one can easily be visualize by the readers and some scenes or lines are easy to relate with.. |
by noha
Beautifull poem carry alot of meaning and you write it in good way with nice flow and powerful words make it stronger my favorait part is when you say:I just want to hide in my bed |
Wow what a great poem! It definitely scores a 5/5 for me! I got very caught up in your poem. It was very emotional. Thanks for sharing. |