by emptysole
Well done i like it it is a very happy compashionate wording lol sorry cant spell atm hope your friend does well keep up the good work |
by SADADDY
This is a very touching and loving poem you have written, the feelings that you feel for this person is strong and can be felt in every word you have penned. I am sorry to hear of her horrible ordeal that she is going through but I know she has found a caring and wonderful person in you. |
This is so sweet and very touching. The rhyme scheme is great, the images fantastic and the flow is smooth, but it is the pure love and passion that really stand out in every bit of this poem. That's the great thing about love-it knows no race, color, gender, background, nationality-it just is and that is all it needs to be. This is beautiful. |