by firexdancer Aug 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Her hands are stained |
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Wow, another great poem. |
by Crystal Gaze
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I love the flow of your poems gab. They seem so natural. And you vocabulary so simple yet holds such a deep meaning. |
by Lisa
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Amazing poetry |
by Nix
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I don't like first and last two stanzas. Rest of this poem is excellent, last two stanzas destroy flow completely. This piece is deep and it has great atmosphere. I like the topic and I really enjoyed in this poem(but I really don't like first and last two stanzas) |
by Alissa
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This poem was terrific, there were so many metaphors, yet the meaning was quite hard to get out. But it was wonderful, falling into so many illusions. You did great! |