by firexdancer Aug 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Her hands are stained |
Wow, another great poem. |
by Crystal Gaze
I love the flow of your poems gab. They seem so natural. And you vocabulary so simple yet holds such a deep meaning. |
by Lisa
Amazing poetry |
by Nix
I don't like first and last two stanzas. Rest of this poem is excellent, last two stanzas destroy flow completely. This piece is deep and it has great atmosphere. I like the topic and I really enjoyed in this poem(but I really don't like first and last two stanzas) |
by Alissa
This poem was terrific, there were so many metaphors, yet the meaning was quite hard to get out. But it was wonderful, falling into so many illusions. You did great! |