Again the two of you have penned a beautiful loving write. Are you sure you aren't lovers? You would think so by these romantic words. You definitely do well together.

"Finding the half that makes me whole"

LOVE IT!! it made my eyebrows go up and in to make puppy dog eyes. That line is so sweet aww i love it.

"For you're the most amazing woman,
And I want to love you for my life,
I need to be with you forever,
So I'm asking you to be my wife "

this also is amazing. especially the last line. it's so sweet and beautiful. makes me miss my man so much. hehe

you're a great writer keep it up
much love .xx