by Ill Give Blood To Your Dried Veins Aug 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Jack and I would wish upon a star and pretend that they've come true. |
by shenoa
Your have such an interesting way of forming your sentences. It's truly unique. I enjoyed this piece, it paints a sad picture in shades of gray, your reader's aren't really sure of which is which. Great job. |
by she
Sounds effortlessly amazing |
by Wake
..already fallen too far. |
This was a very nice poem , sad and very heartbreaking at some [points, wonderfully written and vocabulary was good, loved the way you expressed your feelings in it, great job,, ,your friend Tracy d 5/5 |