This is just plain awesome!! great job!! 5/5

Andrew
Great job. So sad good imagery.

sheltered from the storm
still soaked from the past
always out of service
finally opening up at last

I love these lines. Shows a spark of hope.
Take Care Cindy

Sheltered from the storm
still soaked from the past
always out of service
finally opening up at last

^^ Words cannot describe how much I TRULY enjoyed that stanza....I mean.....I want to say so much about it but its just breath taking and amazing.....

What a gift you have and I'm so glad I decided to check out your poems...I loved this!!!
Chelsey

I liked this poem so much n i enjoyed readin every single word
great job 5/5