This is good but some parts just don't cling as others do. Like your last two lines:

Finally I am close to death
Hanging onto my last breathe

I still like it and hope you keep up the good work.

Nicely done for a "cutter" poem, I really like it. I can really feel the pain and the need for release through the words you've chosen.
My favourite lines would have to be:
"Eyes close I breathe real deep
Through my clothes the blood will seep"
and
"Finally I am close to death
Hanging onto my last breathe"
Love your work, keep it up.

Good job.I really can relate to this poem.i really like it.my favorite lines:

"Eyes close I breathe real deep
Through my clothes the blood will seep"

Kelsie

Nice. <3

Nice poem really good for a cutter like me well i liked it.

In here...i cant relate myself...b/c i never cut.... ^^, just the feeling of depressed..and alone..... ^^, but now...i like the lines here.......realy suicidal typo... ^^, another great job over here... ^^,

5/5 -bryan

I love you so much, very much, and i love ur poems, alot

Good peom, can realy relate, 5/5