Kc,
This is a truly incredible piece of poetry! The feeling that you put into it was amazing and made me want to keep reading. The phrase "Silent Suicide" really made me understand this poem. You picked your words perfectly, so great job!
Keep it up, 5/5
With all due respect,
Hatori
P.S. If you get a chance, could you please rate and comment one of my poems?
Thanks!