Wishing Star [Triquatrain]

Even tho the structure was not the average type i enjoyed reading it, it can be taken in numerous different ways, and im sure to every reader it will portray a different meaning.

Very well done on this one!!

5/5

Beautiful piece of poerty you have here. The language was flawless and the style you choose was great. My favorite stanza had to be the second one. It was filled with emotion. Well done *5/5*

I've never seen anything like this before! It's fabulous! 5/5

For such a confining style it's an awesome poem. Your descriptions are awesome! I love this poem, it's actually sounds quite delicate but yet is so strong. I give you kudo's for writing in a style, because it's something I'm not very good at. Well 5/5 for me for sure. ^^

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Really well done you definately have a unique talent for this