You described this poem so well gave a lot of detail! i really enjoyed it 5/5

This is really good i like it alot
you did well with the style as well
your imagery and words were perfect!
5/5

laura

Absolutley LOVED this style!!! That was so amazing and your details and choice of words made this poem even more great!!...I enjoyed this a lot and might give this style a whirl!
`Chelsey

Wow...Amazing Job..The imagery was so beautiful, And it was a wonderful read...Really enjoyed it...Excellent Job...

Overall 5/5

By the way, Was this style pretty hard??

I thought that pretty damn good. Excellent imagry. 5/5 keep it up

Hey thankyou for ur wonderful comment on my poem..
ur poem was soo beautifuly described.. i cud picture it.. :) this was a beautiful read too 5/5

:)

This poem has me hooked from the beginning lovely choice of words and the imagery is very good.

The imagery was great! Over all the poem was beautiful. I loved it.
5/5
*Brittney

The descriptions, the imagery, and the atmosphere of the poem was breathtaking! Beautiful job.

Hey,
a master piece, the descriptions you give are wonderful as well as the imaginary! I haven't seen this style yet, this is the first one I actually read, maybe I will try it too sometime..back to the poem: Its also a sweet poem and I think that the last stanza is the best one..5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

I liked the poetry form and your suitable words to this masterpiece..The topic was interesting all along the poem and you did a good work with the end

My fave lines are;

Folded hands, across the land
Yearning for love, for might, for life

Keep it up,
Laura

As always, a beautifully written poem. I took pleasure in articulating the rhythm and rhymes of the words you employed: so subtle and delicate they are. I further liked how you portrayed the general idea of a wishing star in a rather classy manner. I think [almost] everyone can connect to the contents since we--young and old--universally admire such a "phenomenon."

A poetical success, nevertheless. A pleasurable read.

Well it was a fine written piece, I like your choice of words, well done. I think it flowed well too.. Great structure. Keep up the good work! ^_^

You described this poem beautifully with so much detail.
It was really Ironic cause I just got back from seeing Star Dust.
Your poem really reminded me of it.
Definitly enjoyable.
5/5 Elaine.

I think you did well for your first try very well indeed and a nice topic picked :)

You have done a great job here, it shows that you are a talented poet, keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Again I like the imagery and the style of this poem. Very nice

I've yet to try this type of form. I keep saying I will, but have yet to get round to it. I think it's wonderful, though. It's interesting, and I love the rhyme scheme.

Your wording was wonderful, and the flow was spectacular. A wonderful read.

Wonderful write. I love the imagery and the word choice here is even better then the last poem. Amazing job. Keep it up. 5/5
Laden with wishes, for fame and riches
Embarks the sky with stardust footprints
Fave lines ^^^^
~ Lainey

I love the imagery in this piece, it's so vivid. I like the subject, too. You have great choice of words in your poems. This one could be a little longer, but it's written flawlessly. 5/5 from me