Great poem. I liked the topic and poetry form. I've done a quatrain before but I never thought of doing a triquatrain. "Cries for ends of mourn and strife" <---- favourite line. 5/5

-Shannon <3

I like it. its unique, and certainly different. i like the style and the use of words you have chosen.

xx trace

Very very strong vocabulary
i loved it
it drew a very vivid image
nice work
5/5

HUH... Cool Poem... I like it :D

Very good, I like the style its very interesting. I made a triquatrain poem too, check it out if you want. Yea, great poem.

This is a nice poem but i think that it should be part of the nature poems
over all though great job.

Really well done you definately have a unique talent for this

For such a confining style it's an awesome poem. Your descriptions are awesome! I love this poem, it's actually sounds quite delicate but yet is so strong. I give you kudo's for writing in a style, because it's something I'm not very good at. Well 5/5 for me for sure. ^^

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I've never seen anything like this before! It's fabulous! 5/5

Beautiful piece of poerty you have here. The language was flawless and the style you choose was great. My favorite stanza had to be the second one. It was filled with emotion. Well done *5/5*

Even tho the structure was not the average type i enjoyed reading it, it can be taken in numerous different ways, and im sure to every reader it will portray a different meaning.

Very well done on this one!!

5/5