Faded Destiny/The Eternal Torment

by Tommy   Aug 10, 2007


Faster I run towards the Forest
My heart screams in pain
The pursuers will never rest
As they close in, so begins the rain.

The Forest cries out into the night
The Hunters closing in on the Prey
Deep from the the shadows, it enters my sight
The only way to get away.

The Castle appears on the Widow's Peak
Ruthless beasts deep on my trail
Inside the Castle, Forgotten Souls shriek
I will succeed where they have failed.

They unleashed a fire upon me
Engulfing this Unholy Land
An explosion and a final plea
As I crash upon the barren sand.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tommy

    Thanks man.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    The way you used your imagery is what makes this a truly amazing poem. 5/5