Listening to black

by Kate   Aug 11, 2007


Listening to Black

Beautiful one
Dead or alive
Can not listen
Wanting the death

Can't think of anything
Won't listen or see
You can see nothing
Try holing onto me

Please try to listen now
Nothing makes such sound
Peaceful serenity
Digging it from the ground

Want to make yourself better
Let me help every time.
Let the emptiness of space
Fill up from the sound of chimes.

Form the beaches again
With thoughts of wind
Holding onto the sand
With small echoing hymns

Trying to listen
Regretting missing
Wishing to change it
Blocking out hissing

Do it again
Ignore the fact
You can listen
Only to black

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  • 14 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    "Please try to listen now
    Nothing makes such sound
    Peaceful serenity
    Digging it from the ground"

    I really like the way it flows, but the title seems to cramp the flow slightly.

    "Form the beaches again
    With thoughts of wind
    Holding onto the sand
    With small echoing hymns"

    Another prime example of awesomeness!
    5/5 =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate

    Well, it is a sylabel poem although it goes from like a few sylables to more and then back down again,

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate

    Oh thank you very much :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Abu3li

    It's wonderful

    expressive

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Thats really good
    xx