The last thing she said

by Tabzitha   Aug 11, 2007


When the night came crushing down,
there was no light and little sound;
the darkness swallowed all around,
my heart and head began to pound.

all my thoughts were racing by;
was it me who was to die?
i wished it all to be a lie,
but instead i was left to cry

she was leaving; i was here.
now it all was crystal clear.
all i could do was stand in fear,
but it was time to perservere.

She lay there, distraught with pain,
"She'll be ok," i seemed to feign.
My whole life seemed, now, mundane.
her death was mine and my heart's own bane.

Up at me, she simply gazed.
I stood there, afraid but amazed,
Her eyes looked dark and sadly hazed;
all the suff'ring left her dazed.

She lifted herself by only a bit
even in pain, she would not quit
She took my hand, her eyes now lit
She showed sadness, but only a whit

Cringing and biting back her dread
She slowly reached and touched my head
"I'll love you even when im dead...",
Are the last words she ever said.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jasmine

    Awww mama i cryed when i read your poem its good!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sophia

    Wow. thats...sad, and touching. amazing poem. loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shan

    I like this poem, and the way you made it rhyme. excellent. and thanks for liking my poem