Debbie
I love to read your formed poetry. This one is really awesome.

On a cold winter's eve it all began;
By his portrait, my soul's desire was warmed.
No more than once I beheld this man,
Whose languid gaze held much pleasant charm.

I love the imagery and word choices in this piece. Excellent write.
Love Cindy

This is one of my favs by you it's awesome it kept me interested and I am rereading it over and over again jsut for the pleasure of it that's how much I like it!!Lol

Great writting
Beck

This was awesome! An awesome use of vocabulary and I was really drawn into your work. Amazing job on making this sound so distinguished and the form you used was great. Absolutely loved this great job.

I liked the form and the word usage here and there..It was so meaningful and your advanced wording absouletely made it perfect to read

My fave lines are;

On sketch, moment in ancient times endured,
Avid dash of fury cloaked death's plateau.

Keep it up dear,
Laura

Tis a hard style to accomplish and you did excellent debbers, love the ending, i give this pantoum a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

This poem is written very well you have a unique style and your poems have a lot of emotion however I fell the title could have been given a little more. Your poem proves that you are a very accomplished poet which unfortunately makes your title a seam a little clumsy.

An other great poem of yours.
I've heard of this form before, I wanted to try it sometimes myself, but it seems so difficult.
But you did a great job.
A good flow and a good word choice.
I really enjoyed reading it.
I look forward to read more of your work.
Take care

This is amazing
must have taken some time to complete
it
with there being so many rules to follow for it
i think ill have to try this kind some time lol
okay well wonderful job

Keenan

Not enough words to describe this great poem, as always you have been a great writer who always touch my heart....
thank you for sharing this great poem, and a 5/5 from me as it really deserve it...

I've never came across this form on this site before. I like the poem though. Very well written. The words are very descriptive and help to paint an image.
great write!
5/5
*Brittney

Really beautiful piece Debbie, I've never read that sort of poem before but hey5/5, great job.

Amazing job! I love your poetry. Your vocabulary is just amazing and everything flows so wonderfully. You're an amazing writer!

Honestly i'm not familiar with the different types of poems but i can say that this one is so amazing and caught my interest..v great work it flow smoothly can't find any flaws in here. I admire your chosen words it on how it jive with the intense emotions held in every lines. Great job!!

I thought the poem was written so very well and I can't believe this poem isn't 5/5 overall. Not only the word choice but the imagery alone is outstanding. Truly one of your better writes 5/5 by far GG23

This pantoum was well written The content is very enchanting and word blended perfectly.

I like this poem its very well...honestly i think you tried to hard to make this poem what it is....very nice poem just seems more like something you had to write not something that came from the heart...but it was good i did like it...Manda

Beautiful! Vocabulary was amazing. and emotions, i dont know why but it made me all soft inside. Love the imagery. A flawless piece just really. Loved everything in it.
5/5

Marian I aboslutly loved this style! You wrote this so well I can't described how much I liked reading this from you....you write excellently!!!....
Chelsey

Omg.. this poem is perfect! it has all the poetic essence in it, Fantastic job! your word choice is really impressive. You're a great writter.

5/5 as always

Very creative poem. I love the topic of finding something deep within a "lifeless portrait" keep it up