by Painted By Colors llInLovell Aug 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
In a world of Hate and Toil, |
by x Mo x
Aw cute. Thats a nice poem! The rhyming was great! The flow though...it got a little rocky at times, but it still sounds good. Some of the lines had emphasises (is that a word?) that made it hard to read, but sometimes it happens. The message of the poem is really cute and it was very nicely written. Keep it up! |