by Bre Monique Aug 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
As we sat there and stared at the stars |
The ending i think could have been said in a diffrent way but this poem had a great flow and strong words and emotions. 5/5 |
by Leanette
ITS R3AL CUT3 i WiSH MY FiRST KiSS WAS AS LiK3 THiS ... DARN L0L iTZ G00D |
by Lola
Omg wow,its sooo sweet,totally cute!!!! |
by Marc Ortiz
I really like the place where you had your first kiss. Anyway this was really sweet. Good job. |