I really like the place where you had your first kiss. Anyway this was really sweet. Good job.

Keep up the good work!

Omg wow,its sooo sweet,totally cute!!!!

ITS R3AL CUT3 i WiSH MY FiRST KiSS WAS AS LiK3 THiS ... DARN L0L iTZ G00D

The ending i think could have been said in a diffrent way but this poem had a great flow and strong words and emotions. 5/5