Tortured By Your Love

by x Mo x   Aug 11, 2007


Deep in your eyes
I ponder and dream
But soon come to realize
That this is love.

Holding your hand
As you whisper to me.
I need a chance to stand
And walk away from
Your torture.

My legs give out,
My heart goes wild,
I simply want to shout
How much I love you.

Feeling your lips
On my skin,
Hands on my hips,
You pull me into
Your torture.

As you hold me there
And whisper gently
Love is in the air
Surrounding our bodies.

Thinking of only you
My mind goes blank.
Not know what to do,
I close my eyes slowly
Tortured by your love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ms.Sweets

    Seems like you are in love with some one and all they want is sex... Not a good thing.

  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That is really good, specially liked it how you kept refering to ur title, that was really good and the fact that it atcually sounded good after ur verse, it wasnt just a random thing, it was really compatable which was good, one thing though, u probably like it, but just saying... when u say
    You pull me into
    Your torture.
    why does it have 2 lines? I understand why, But I mean the second line sounds a bit corny...like I mean if it said,
    you pull me into,
    Nothing but torture....or like
    Not but torture,
    Is what you pull me into..

    or something, would sound better, just something missing...it sounds a little...miguided or something...BUT you must like it that way so yeah, think about it?
    Nice work,
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