When I First Saw You

by LuvstruckChild   Aug 11, 2007


When I First Saw You,
I Realized That Something About You Made My Stomach Flutter.
When I First Heard You Say My Name,
I Noticed How Nice It Sounded Rolling Off Your Tongue.
And When You First Held My Hand,
So Much Electricity Shot Through My Arm That I Never Wanted You To Let It Go.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hearts Abyss

    Hey kates, i really liike that poem and i can relate exept for the hand holding not yet but maybe soon

  • 17 years ago

    by pceluvr4hapenes

    I like it... it is simple though... maybe too much though it is good!!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was an okay poem, I have one suggestion though..

    try not to capitalize every word..

    Example:

    When I First Saw You,
    = When I first saw you,

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