by my name is Llama Aug 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My exultation |
by hadia
I love how you wrote this. |
by hadia
I love how you wrote this. |
by Jenni Marie
Despite the form being so short, you still managed to pack in so much emotion and depth in this piece, while filled with such melancholy, I found it to be beautifully written and a delightful read. |
by x Mo x
I really liked that. It was so short, but the words you chose made it seem longer. It had more meaning than any haiku I could ever write. Great job! |
by nikki
Wow. haiku's are one of my favorite poems i have ever encounted. i loved this, it was nicely thought of and you expressed it well |