Wow. haiku's are one of my favorite poems i have ever encounted. i loved this, it was nicely thought of and you expressed it well

I really liked that. It was so short, but the words you chose made it seem longer. It had more meaning than any haiku I could ever write. Great job!

~Mo~

Despite the form being so short, you still managed to pack in so much emotion and depth in this piece, while filled with such melancholy, I found it to be beautifully written and a delightful read.

I love how you wrote this.
not only that, but it has a really good meaning!

I love how you wrote this.
not only that, but it has a really good meaning!