A hearts play

by TarTears   Aug 11, 2007


A sweet conversation about us..
You think i`m all your life..

But you shouldn`t..

Love is a theatrical play..
An illusion for actors seeking for passions..
Sometimes you break it because you get tired..
But some times you break it..
Because you are not tired at all..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    I agree with masked_senses(how could I do the opposite :p)...well,seriously every single one of us has a style(or at least should have)...emotion comes from within and not from the means of writing

  • 17 years ago

    by masked_senses

    Kind of soon..It was more like a quote than a poem..But i loved the idea..5/5..

    P.S.:i would suggest not to listen other people like hatori about what they say and keep your one unique style..Your style is awesome as long as you think so..

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    TarTears,
    This was an interesting topic that you chose! I'm afraid though, that I did not particularly like the layout. Maybe if you made the lines almost the same length, and added more detail. If there was more detail, then I could understand this poem more. For me, the words jumped around too much and confused me.
    I have no clue if I'm making any sense right now, so just PM if you want me explain it better.
    Other than that, a good poem ^_^
    Right now, I'd probably say 3-4/5, but that could go up ^_^

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you please rate and comment one of my poems?
    Thanks!

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