Love Kills

by TillyMariex   Aug 11, 2007


As we walked hand in hand
down the dark lake
i couldn't help but to feel
that this was a big mistake

i decided i could trust you
i finally felt safe
then i felt you grip me tighter
and i saw the look on your face

it was the look of hatred
and it stung me like a needle
i looked at you in confusion
your eyes were like those of a beetle

Then i felt your ice cold hands grab ahold of me
And you looked me in the eyes and said 'I hate you'
then you pushed me down so hard i could barley breathe
i fell to the bottom by that lake and i didn't know what to do

I looked up and saw you coming
I tried to scream but no sound came out
Then you stood above me and put your hands around my neck
I didn't know what to do so i just fought

It was getting hard to breathe
everything started to fade away
then i knew i was surly dead
Then i saw you get up and walk away

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  • 17 years ago

    by Groovy

    Wow, i wish i could write like you, looks like words come so easy, very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    That poem is heaps good i kinda have had that happen to me

    did this really happen to you?

    nice work though
    xxx
    Sarah
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    That poem is heaps good i kinda have had that happen to me

    did this really happen to you?

    nice work though
    xxx
    Sarah
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    Hey I want to enter ur mind and steal or ur ideas and thoughts, ur really really amazing, I dunno i really suck infront of u! good job!