I Promise

by Independent   Aug 11, 2007


I'm making this promise to me and you that i will never let this thing go...
I'm making a promise that i will stay true...
I'm making a promise that i will never cheat on you...
I'm making a promise that i will always be honest with you...
I'm making a promise to not only cherish you,but every little thing that you do...
I'm making a promise to me and you that i will never let this thing go...
I'm making a promise that i will stay true...
I'm making a promise that i will never cheat on you...
i love you to much inside...
So I'm making this promise that i will always be with you, so don't let nobody tell you that aint true

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Yeah, I still kept my promises and never do such a thing to hurt him. Yeah, I like that. U r good thinkin stuff like that, the way u wrote is good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I like this poem. i like the idea. But i think that the repetition is a little over-used.

    Good job tho. 4/5

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