Comments : Impossible dream

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    Wow, that was an amazing poem, you really have described the way i am feeling at the moment perfectly. 5/5 def. thanks for writing such a powerful and emotive poem, it helps knowing other people have experienced the same things as me!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Now this poem is truely about me..very well written..I love this one the most..beautiful..the way u express ur feelingz is wonderful..powerful words..well done sweetheart..
    -sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I like this alot!!

  • 17 years ago

    by HisBlueEyedAngel

    That is sad. I like it keep up all the great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by cassanova

    I got a bunch of poems like this one i know how it feels check out my poems we write similar

  • 17 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    From the poems I've read, I get this feeling that you have a love that you miss and want back. If right I say great job and good luck with finding him and getting him back. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    I think this poem is really good. keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifer

    This is really well written. I think it is amazing how it captures the readers attention from the beginning.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Very Very Nice Poem.... You Capture the real feeling in your poetric work.

    Specially this stanza...:)

    I have forgiven you it's true,
    But i still think about you.
    And i wish i still have a special,
    place in your heart too. xXx

    I STILL MISS YOU SO MUCH

    RASHEED KHOKHAR
    Keep It Up

  • 17 years ago

    by ari

    I love this poem.
    but when you said 'weather', it's actually spelled 'whether' in that context.
    keep up the good work.
    thank you for commenting my piece =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Colourful Mind

    Another great poem your wrk is improving!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    This one is one of your best...To me~

    K~

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice poem, the words flowed perfectly.
    This poem reminds me of a dream I once had.