Decisions

by Anonymous Angel   Aug 11, 2007


Everything has a meaning,
you can't ignore the facts,
Never know what they might bring,
Not knowing what to expect.

Each choice can make a difference,
you never know the out come,
Always have to make a decision,
in order to move on.

What if I make the wrong one?
Will this be the end?
Is it my time already?
or had destiny lend a hand?

If I make the right one,
then I soon have to make more,
That's what life is about,
making the right decisions or the wrong one.

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I have a writers block and I haven't come up with something better than this so..any critique will be welcome but be nice.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxAn Angel With Broken WingsxX

    This Is A Really Good Poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a good poem. You're right about decision working. The flow was a bit off, but it's still totally true. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    Each choice can make a difference,
    you never know the out come,
    Always have to make a decision,
    in order to move on.

    wow, i loved those lines, very true and meaningful. you may have writers block but you still put out a good poem!! i love it great job!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww where nice theme. Meaningful and makes the reader think, very nice work on that. And decisions are so important! Aww never know which one will be the right one till you have made it. nice how you pointed that out. It was wierd for me just to read poem with no emotions in it but refreshing so liked that too!
    5/5! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    It's pretty good....I couldn't really think of anything wrong. It appeals to logic more than emotion, but I dk, that's not a bad thing, just something I'm not too used to.

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