Right moment

by Nuh   Aug 11, 2007


Humm what words can fight all emotions,
beneath it all we lie to buy us some time till the right moment,
Every minute passes by a cut in the vein i feel
Deal with it everyday till nights comes along
shut eyes to dream silents goes on for hours
Till the moment comes.......

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    VERY GOOD!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Not your best.
    I feel it was a little confusing, but that's because of the length.
    Try expanding it, and putting more detail.. That way it will be easier too understand, and make for a better read:)

    Im still gonna give you a 4/5.
    Keep writting,
    Elly.

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