My Baby Girl (Multi-Stanza Limerick)

by Sherry Lynn   Aug 11, 2007


There was a jeep that caught thine eye
She was bought one night in July
Sported a black soft top
Drove around nonstop
Love for my wrangler was not denied

She was five speeds and a deep red
Thine favorite it went unsaid
We played in the mud
She was my best bud
When we departed I hung my head

Yes, there was a jeep I admired
Her beauty left many inspired
Many days of fun
Spent out in the sun
Her openness always desired

--Sherry Lynn Hull Richardson

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Very interesting...I love this one too..I felt like u always have this passion in ur words..honestly u seem like u write with ur heart!!

    a very well penned poem..just one line sounded off for me..but nothin imp
    still deserves to be admired..for u have such a way with words..

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    Yes, there was a jeep I admired
    Her beauty left many inspired
    Many days of fun
    Spent out in the sun
    Her openness always desired

    A good satire on the closed culture of the day. Enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Great Poem :D 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow this was interesting truck 2nd stanza my favorite 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Haha, i love this, excellent work..i love the style you used to portray such excitement, great work!

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