Letting You Go

by Sweet Disposition   Aug 11, 2007


And now it makes me want to cry
Cause you've lost that sparkle in your eye
Your face; it doesn't glow anymore
Your love for me is dead for sure

I loved it when you needed me
I'd smile cause you believed in me
I'd found the right one finally
But then your feelings changed

I never dreamt our love would fade
I thought an unbreakable bond was made
I stayed up late all night and prayed
That you'd try again to love me

Although you haven't left me yet
And my head is saying 'do not fret'
My heart has placed its final bet
For us the end has come

In my heart there is a place for you
And its walls can not be broken through
But now all that is left to do
Is smile, and let you go.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This was a great poem and the ryhme scheme was really good. breaks ups r always a pain =/ but this poem was soothing =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A great piece love. It was full of emotion and a great flow, with wonderful rhymes. I don't really have a favorite stanza, it was all pretty much as good as each other, the plus side is though, I can't find anything I dislike about it.

    Brad

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    What a beautifully written piece.

    The depth and emotion you portray in this is very well done, the feelings are easily sensed by the reader.

    The imagery creates vivid pictures and the flow is good throughout the whole piece.

    Beautifully done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Janessa

    This poem reminds me of myself.....its the way i feel amout my first love....we've broken up but im gonna tell ya that one day i will marry that boy

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Another great poem, it was beautiful and really heartfelt, which is what i love. i like it when the poem comes from your heart and you can feel it. beautiful job, i loved it wonderful

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