That's so true, I some what always find that their are always answers around the corner....Good poem, injoyed it |
Excellently written poem, it holds so many emotions. |
by Melpomene
I really enjoyed this piece, It was really deep holding great emotions. The flow was spot on almost chant like, really smooth and didn't falter at all. You wrote a poem which held such truth and i'm sure many people can relate to this no matter how young or how old. A beautiful piece you have here. Loved it alot. ~mel |
Excellent flow to this write! And I loved the part about answers being just around the corner. |
by 19Rusty
First off thank you for having me on your favorites, I added you just as well. Your dark pieces are a favorite to me. In your words it just connects many things in my life and it makes me reflect. I wanted to keep reading because it was like a short story of love that went wrong, just as it has in mine a while ago, perfect. |
Answers lead to questions and questions lead to answers a never ending cycle nice poem 5/5 |
by Nix
WOW!!! Incredible poem, atmosphere is powerful and imagery is great. Very original and flow is excellent. You described emotions amazingly. 5/5 |