What would you do

Wow, gets you thinking.
Why do people do that, ignore what is happening right in front of them, or next door. A child can not do anything and therefore relies on the help of people who should know better. I think this poem is a bit of an eye opener.

Kelly
xx

I like this a lot because it's so simple and yet you feel a depth of agony. And I am SO sorry that these are all true, I mean it's made you an amazing poet but I'm sure you would have rather never written than experience these things. Actually I've written quite a few on abuse and I would love it if you'd check them out. I've never experience it personally and I would love to get your view on it. Thank you very much and you are so welcome for the comments. Once again, if you keep writing I'll keep reading, Tracy.
~Midnight Sun

Very good.
Short, yet so much feeling.
I give you a 5/5.
Good Job.

Its true Tracy
Good poem
The affect is exactly like you potrayed
Well done
Keep the good work goin
5/5
your friend
rohan
And ya well i wrote a huge amounta poems
YOu can take your time to comment a few or even one though I know you still will read them
tc

Wow very interesting short but sweet 5/5