Awesome start keep it up, i know it will me a masterpiece when it's finish. And thank you so much for the comment. Shanik

I agree. if only everyday could be that great.... hmm keep dreaming... lol. great pome so far. 5/5.
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It is very interesting. Maybe you could change a few things, you could write one more stanza. I like it, ending is very effective. Whole poem is written greatly!