Okay. I'll past my review of Tempted's poem in here. (Saves more time and energy, hehe.)

"Nicely done collab. I'm glad both of you got to finish it skillfully well. :] Kudos!

"Two hearts brought together by sincere goodbyes,"

^ How odd that line is. It was, in fact, a kind of irony. I, too, use irony on my poems: it's one of my favorite tools when I write poetry. I'll give you my props for that.

"Two hearts bleeding, brought together by fate,
Nobody guessed that there love had just begun,"

^ Interesting couplet. Though the general idea of the poem is of a tragic love, I beg to differ with my own taste and own case as well: an unrequited love. There's nothing much more dramatic than this kind of love, I believe. Anyway, the said couplet is perfectly correlated with a personal experience of mine. Quite nostalgic.
Congratulations, darlings! Both of you wrote it well. (Forgive me for rambling such nonsenses...*coughs*)

"If the guy can do it (betray) the first time in the hard way, there's no doubt he can do it easily on the second time." <33"

Hopefully, I didn't ramble much! :3

Bryan
Great job by you both on this write. This form seems so hard to pull off. Emotions really run deep in this poem.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy