Comments : Beat Down Palace

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    You do it everytime. Your writing always moves me. This is an excellent piece.

    To sleep with such a heartache
    may bring to one relief
    Seldom does it follow
    deep inside your dreams
    A comfort in the holding
    of a heart and soul that breaks
    Are fragile thoughts consuming
    on a mind that's wide awake.

    I loved this stanza. Just so heartfelt. Beautiful!
    Love Cindy