This was sad, the poem was well written and the wording was simple yet effective. The flow was great and you did a good job.
It was a beautiful piece, and the message at the end brought tears to my eyes.
Love always, Tara-Kay
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A Very captivating peice.

This actually brought tear's to my eyes. Sad poetry about greiving loss always do.
You really put heartfelt emotion's in this.
And Im sorry for your loss of Eric.

A very sad peice.
5/5 Elaine.

The flow suits out right..the emotions and the thoughts were good..it was a sad poem but it was great..so friend will be happy and give you smile back with this