First Kiss

by Bogie   Aug 12, 2007


Looking at her then calling her
Needing her before wanting her
Given roses and good luck charms
Just to hold her tight in my arms
To smell the essence of her hair
Awaiting Sunshines avid stare

Looking at him then calling him
Needing him before wanting him
Mystic angel lights a candle
Smiles and humming with a giggle
Sings a song of love for her man
Awaiting her first kiss from Dan

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  • 17 years ago

    by ViCTORiA

    Great poem it really followes and the emotion potraed in the poem is great 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely penned, "from the lover to the lover" even though simply, you expressed them within beautiful emotions...Breathtaking!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    A very well penned poem. Nice to read. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem, I like the structure of this piece, well done. What I also like was the use of repetition - it was effective. Also adding 'ing' really enhances the flow, good job.

    5/5

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