Another cute poem =] I really like these stanza's :

That goes round in circles
And gives the see some sparkles.

It spins all around,
So people can come earthbound.

You're talented =]
5/5
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I don't like the last stanza but rest of this poem is great. It is original and atmosphere is interesting. Short but still very powerful piece. 5/5

This was very good,you give life to the light house and makes it look simple great job, your friend Tracy d......................5/5