by tears i cry Aug 12, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
I wrote this poem for my brother. i hope one day my father can forgive him |
by Brittany C
Hmm, that wasn't fair to him. Hmm, I'll keep my thoughts to myself on this one. Great poem, a lot of emotion and great wording. 5/5 |
by Heba
Never feel sorry for what you are, we have to accept ourselves. |
by yaneris
It's very nice dow.... |
by Goodbye
I think this poem was good. First of all, I like the topic of it. You choose it good. And what I like even more is that you really had a good flow, it was a pleasure for me to read. |
by noha
Nice work i enjoy readding as i want to see how the story end and you make it flow nicely and so deep feeling every where each line interest me ,5/5 |