This poem is good....i bet this really means alot to you..and i wish your brother the best of luck with the whole situation...some of the rhyming seemed kind of off though... i give you a 4/5...nice poem.

Really nice poem! lots of emotion. really heartfelt and there's a great message there.

I know i will love her again
but you i may not
to know that your not proud of me
of this homosexual son you've got

O.m.G i love this ending.. and I'm so very sorry your brother is not accepted by your father...

But this was a great poem to read and i rate it 5.5 =)

See this is a scary topic for me because im bisexual but i have not told my parents yet and im a little afraid too, but you took this from another persons point of view and that is simply outstanding -
raindrops 5/5

This is good,nice poem,..and I am actually touched with the flow of your poem,.

Very moving piece of poetry. It shows how hard it really is to have a dad who doesn't accept who for who you really are. I'm sure your brother loves this poem very much. And that he's proud to have such a supporting sister like you. I loved the way you showed your feelings in this poem. Very emotional poem, and I'm glad to have read it. 5/5

Nice work i enjoy readding as i want to see how the story end and you make it flow nicely and so deep feeling every where each line interest me ,5/5

I think this poem was good. First of all, I like the topic of it. You choose it good. And what I like even more is that you really had a good flow, it was a pleasure for me to read.

Thanks for the poem. :)

It's very nice dow....

Never feel sorry for what you are, we have to accept ourselves.

Hmm, that wasn't fair to him. Hmm, I'll keep my thoughts to myself on this one. Great poem, a lot of emotion and great wording. 5/5