You

by Tiffaney   Aug 12, 2007


Every kiss i give let it be to you
every tear i cry let it be for you
every laugh i laugh let it be because of you
every time open my eyes let you be there

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  • 17 years ago

    by Treshawna

    Well this is a sweet poem for someone your age.

  • 17 years ago

    by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum

    Short yet very powerful, well done :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThatS a wonderfuL writE....yoU deservE foR youR poemS.... welL donE... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    It started off good but the last 2 lines were random, u have the same problem as me, finishing the poem off with good sentences, I think u need to put more effort into making the finish sentences off for it is the most affective and intense but of the poem...I just gave a long winded comment on one of ur poems and i sent it and then it said "poem deleted" -_- so yeah good work, its on the way..
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  • 17 years ago

    by The Nameless Poet

    Short and sweet, i like it

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