Short and sweet, i like it

It started off good but the last 2 lines were random, u have the same problem as me, finishing the poem off with good sentences, I think u need to put more effort into making the finish sentences off for it is the most affective and intense but of the poem...I just gave a long winded comment on one of ur poems and i sent it and then it said "poem deleted" -_- so yeah good work, its on the way..
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ThatS a wonderfuL writE....yoU deservE foR youR poemS.... welL donE... 5/5

luzaN

Short yet very powerful, well done :)

Well this is a sweet poem for someone your age.