ItS a finE piecE of worK, thaT thrilleD uS greatlY....

luzaN

GreaT joB...

luzaN anD nazeeR

Sara great read, and don't despair in your writing you rhymed and kept the flow though long I had to read it and this poem made a lot sense to me.

Aww, that'S a sweetT poeM! I likE iT :)

luzaN

I am really happy to read your poems again and again and comment....
Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

Very interesting poem. My favorite stanza is the first. Flow is great and you expressed emotions superbly. Excellent atmosphere too. 5/5