by Brittany01 Aug 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
& it's hard to go to sleep when all i think about is you, |
Very good poem. And i agree with Marc, its hard to make repetition smooth and flowing, but you did a great job. |
by Marc Ortiz
Well I like the repetition in this poem, good job. I think it was a very good poem, keep up the good work |
by Meme
I really can realte to this poem awesome job 5/5 |