Comments : My heart is still holding on.

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    I really can realte to this poem awesome job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I like the repetition in this poem, good job. I think it was a very good poem, keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    Very good poem. And i agree with Marc, its hard to make repetition smooth and flowing, but you did a great job.

    -Alyssa.xo

    5/5