SEXUAL FANTASY

by Bree   Aug 12, 2007


The walls are white,
Your eyes crystal blue,
Flickering light,
Im so in love with you,
Look at your lips,
Come over to me,
Put your hands on my hips,
No place i'd rather be,
Not a word will i say,
You read my mind,
Dont want you to go away,
Gotta unwind,
Look at your eyes i start to shake,
Isn't it funny,
The mess that we make,
When all falls silent,
You go to speak,
I unzip your pants,
Making you weak,
Im sitting on the bed,
I look up to you,
Mystery in your eyes,
You know what im about to do,
I take off your top,
Down goes your pants,
Push you gently down on the bed,
Just give me a chance,
Undressing slowly,
I lay ontop,
I know your scared,
But you dont want me to stop,
The light goes out,
As we work into a pace,
Getting closer and closer,
Winning the race,
As we finish,
On goes the light,
Still no words,
But it's alright,
I sit up,
So do you,
I look you in the eyes,
As you say....babe, I love you

IM STILL A VIRGIN LOL

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I think it was a good poem, I have some suggestions though..

    First try to split it into stanzas, Capitalize all the I's :)

    And last.. you have some minor errors
    Like this line.. (Im) so in love with you,
    = I'm

    Nonetheless a great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney

    Even if you are a virgin this is beautiful. That special moment between two lovers was captured and shown in a different light. I loved it.
    5/5
    *Brittney

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    I really like this poem as you capture the moment between the two lovers beautifully.

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    Hey bree bree its a good one lo0ol
    keep it up :)