5/5 beautiful poem. the feelings of love and the loss of it are so purely put into words. well done

This is a very beautiful poem extremely sad and very heartfelt write, well written and you expressed yourself very well, great job, keep it up,, your friend Tracy d.....5/5

This was a good poem i liked it very much check out some of my stuff its pretty good

Thats so cute.....dont u have regrets....:( good work and thanks for ur comment, u rock

Very sweet and passionate... A true love poem

I really like this and thanks for talking to me

Amazing.

Good one.. really... hope u wont be upset if i give u a bit of advice.. try to make longer lines, cause with short ones it sounds "over rhymed"... just like i dont know.. a pop song.
try to read my "Sanatorium" or "Leaving" writings.. to see what i mean... long lines give it a more epic sensation.. it can work very well for you, ant they "sound" more mature
anyways thats just a suggestion u know better what u want to write.. dont be upset about what i said ok?
anyways i like this one so 5/5

Good poem but try to make the rhythm sound right... good expression 4.5/5

Nice poem. Lots of feeling.

Hmmmm.... It is interesting but little pathetic, yet you wrote it wonderfully!

I really liked this one as well. Very beautiful, and it makes me wish that my guy would care that much about me! Seriously though, this is a wonderful poem.

Really sad and touching poem.
i liked it
had many feelings =]

xo.louii

Ehh.. 2 words: BEAUTIFUL & AMAZING!!
i loved this poem a lot. Keep up the great work!