by Bexx3
That was good for a mistical poem...:) |
Yay! ^_^ I love the night. I'm suprised to see you are also a new member :) You got my taste in poems girl! Maybe I can keep you on my friends list and read any new poems you may write. Very Excellent poem I must say. You made the night sound so beautiful and I love how well you described it. Very Pretty poem of darkness :) Thanks for reading and commenting my poem. 5/5 Wonderful poem! |
by Marina
Ohh wow!! you're such an amaizeing writer!!! what wonderful expression!!! this is the best peem i've read in a really long time 5/5!! such an awsome poem!! very very nice flow! i love how you keep the rythem... DON'T STOP WRITEING! |
by Yuna
That poem was really good! It had a steady beat and the rhyming scheme was one I hadn't read before. It was so wonderful! I love the different words you used the describe the different elements and creatures in the poem. I also like how you kept the subject consistant throughout the whole piece. I love Fantasy, and this was true fantasy. I love how you described the angels. Perfect! Great job!! |
by Kyle
Awesome poem! good job |