by JaMeS Aug 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I know i should say this |
by tears i cry
A good flow some good rhyming but some of the lines didnt make sense 3/5 |
I really loved this poem and ur part one, so deep and so honest...i hope this girl goes all well for you, i really do and let no heart break come, |
Its been a while since ive read love poems. and i think this one's really great. makes me want to read more love poems. good work 5/5 |
by Adelle
Good poem the emothion really shines through I can wait for part 3 again my only negitive comment I that you have used i alot and not made it a capital I and your sentances do not begin with capitals. |
by Hebe
What a sweet poem. |